Lady in the red dress

2 03 2011

Her sultry, sensual voice held his attention.

“I want it hot. Sizzling and intense. I want to feel the heat on my tongue, licking down my throat, consuming the rest of my body. You see, I’ve been playing it safe for too long. Now let me burn. Make me sweat, make me beg for relief, make me come back for more. I don’t care if you think I’m wanton for these gratuitous demands. I don’t know you and I don’t care. Just don’t you dare leave me cold.”

 

The waiter nodded. “Ma’am, I’ll be back with your Thai Pepper Steak.”

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(This is a response to the 100 words challenge in Velvet Verbosity. The word for the week was “gratuitous”. Everyone’s welcome to join!)

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29 responses

2 03 2011
prinsesangmarikit

eeeew! (i’m talking about the Pepper Steak).. hehehe. ;)

2 03 2011
evenstarwen

Hahaha! Be brave, precious. With lots of water.

3 03 2011
June Anderson

Eeeew! (Me, too.)

2 03 2011
Tara R.

I should order my next dish of curry the same way. Great ending!

2 03 2011
evenstarwen

You should definitely do that. Let us know how it goes. ;-)

3 03 2011
Michael

Delightful!

3 03 2011
June Anderson

Well written. I saw this coming, but I still think it was well written. And I only think I saw it coming because I was poised not to be tricked again! LOL! Good job.

3 03 2011
barbara

love this . . . I actually was thinking maybe you were going to the gym with this one. :) It works.

3 03 2011
barbara

well – except for the red dress part! laughing at myself now.

3 03 2011
evenstarwen

Thank you, Michael, June, and Barbara! I hope you had as much fun reading as I did while writing it. :)

3 03 2011
Kerri Anne

I’m hereby holding you personally responsible for my current steak craving.

3 03 2011
evenstarwen

You are not alone. I tricked myself into craving spicy food in the wee hours of the morning.

3 03 2011
Lance

Deana and I will be eating Thai food in your honor this Friday. We’ll toast our teas to you.

well written

3 03 2011
evenstarwen

I thank you deeply for that honor. Enjoy. :)

3 03 2011
Jennifer

I totally bought it and was getting excited for you, encouraging you in your shameless demand of rightful pleasure.
I don’t eat meat :(

3 03 2011
evenstarwen

You made me laugh, Jennifer. That was the reaction I was going for. Thank you. :) (I wonder if you’ve tried hot potato and onion curry. It’s always my favorite in this little vegetarian restaurant that I know.)

3 03 2011
arcticwren

You know, I bet this has happened more than once…. Nice misdirection!

3 03 2011
evenstarwen

Thank you, my dear! I’m looking forward to reading your take on it.

3 03 2011
stef~

yummmyyyy. i like them hot! yey for Thai Pepper Steak ;-)

3 03 2011
Teresa

Wow! You got me with that one! Good job!!!

5 03 2011
evenstarwen

Thank you, stef and Teresa! You made me smile. :D

5 03 2011
TinfoilMagnolia

Oh, my gosh! So awesome! Love it. Now I am hungry. For Thai food. Yeah, that’s it.

6 03 2011
e6n1

ROFL!! I didn’t see that final line coming! Great economy of language!

6 03 2011
AuroraLee

LOL nice one! Some of you know I love endings with a twist, especially in these drabbles. You definitely had me with this one! :P

6 03 2011
evenstarwen

Magnolia, e6n1 and Aurora,

I’m so glad you liked it. Thanks for reading!

8 03 2011
mettapanda

Fantastic! I’ve only recently started reading your blog, so I was totally hooked in: “Is she really going there? So brave!!!” The ending was so great – I cracked up. :) I hope you don’t mind that I shared it on FB (with link, of course)! :D Well done!

8 03 2011
evenstarwen

Thank you so much! Of course I don’t mind the link. I’m delighted that you like it, because I really had fun writing that post. Have a nice day.

8 03 2011
Velvet Verbosity

Hehehe. I think y’all are going to have to go easy on the surprise twist endings. I’m on to you now. :P But it was fun, even if I knew you were going to throw in a twist.

8 03 2011
evenstarwen

Yes, I think this only really catches the newbies. But it’s still fun. Bwahaha.

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